by KristaMorane
this doesn't make sense, for somebody who just found out his girlfriend back in town and he is not on the phone to her is BS. and since she has a key to his place and all she does is arrange his dresser drawer!!!! after finding lingerie that is not hers I would think she would be lived and waiting for him
I can understand being enthralled with somebody and not thinking strait, but going on a "date " that is not his girlfriend on her first night back is BS . even if he is a player, they don't screw up that bad by not at least calling to say welcome back and when can I see you
need to redo this chapter
BS,
Good point. However, this is just a cliffhanger moment and I'll weave that idea into chapter 3. You notice it ends just at the moment of discovery and perhaps he doesn't make it to McNeals on time.
- K
I am enjoying Gordy's story very much please continue .. has he been wearing that grey skirt? I am not sure how he had on pants when he had to put on the tights .. I would think that there would be something about being appropriately shaved, any visible flesh ? Seems like arms, chest and legs need a clipping, not to mention an appropriate hair style, new wig also ? And let's not forget minimum appropriate makeup. :) TG Tiffany
His girlfriend figures that he was cross-dressing and today I get him to crossdress at work and how much more did they give him