by thebobber326
You had her resting her chest on an active burner? How long does it take to heat up in your kitchen you fucking idiot? 30 seconds? Maybe MAYBE 60 seconds and she was getting fucked For at least 5 minutes.
You want to change the laws of fucking physics to suit your story, then don’t write. Like Gary Gygax of Forgotten Realms books would tell his authors: “You’re creating wizards and gods with the power to blow up the moon. DON’T blow up the moon”.
So way over the top and incredibly long that it actually became boring. All believable story has long since left the building, not worth a rating.
Yes not fully realistic at moments but honestly still loving it! I would absolutely keep reading this story if you did more!
When's the next chapter going to come out? Enjoying the deepthroating elements
I'm happy to hear some of you are enjoying it! Know that chapter 8 is being worked on...very slowly. I'm still pretty early into it. I wish I had a timeframe for its release to give you but it really does depend solely on whenever I feel like writing. I got a little burnt out after this one, especially since chapter 6 seemed like a tough act to follow for me personally, but hopefully I'll work on 8 more consistently soon so I can get it out to you. Follow me if you want to know when it's done!
Thanks for responding! You do you man, the fact that you're working on it is plenty enough for me!