All Comments on 'Grace Breaks Caitlin'
by thebobber326
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 2 years agoNo one will admit to reading it, butt there are enough out there that will love it!
Anonymousover 2 years agoBreak me in properly, PLEASE!
Orpheum 69
coolstrangeravenueover 2 years agoonly because you asked for feedback, would've liked if Grace told all the men to cum in her pussy and knock her up
Anonymousover 2 years agoIt is hard to rate this as a story, as a rape scene it would get 4-5 stars but there was NO story here. I will or would read a part two but like to see a bit more communication. Pappasleaze!
Anonymousover 1 year agoIt just doesn't work that way. Rape victims don't cum a zillion times while most likely being a bleeding, swollen, painful mess. Then add cross contamination from an oversized dildo used up the ass, you have infection. This chapter was actually disgusting.
crittergirl11 months agoThe description of Grace and Caitlin was very much just being told "these bitches are hot", rather than being shown. And the innocent virgin who's incredibly hot and teases all the boys without even knowing it is really overused. That, the lack of anything resembling a story, and the fact that Caitlin cuts a million times without any description of her enjoying it leaves me not bothering to check out the rest of the series.
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