All Comments on 'Grace's Covert Humiliation Ch. 03'

Wow! Great story.

Great story mate, looking forward to the next one!

Very good story. Can’t wait to read the next part.

Nice nice more

I'm glad if you enjoyed this set and appreciate you commenting. Chapter 4 is a logical stopping point. However, I'll likely put together an epilogue for this series. I plan to work on a new story line next.

As always, happy to hear suggestions for improvement from those of you who are more experienced writers than me, either here or in private.

Also always happy to entertain interesting ideas for incorporation into stories from anyone.

Love your writing

"The story delves a bit into the husband's involvement with his wife's establishment or work, as well as the interactions with students. Your writing is incredible, and the character descriptions are excellent. Although I don't approve of the husband's practices, it's a very good, very captivating story, deserving of 5 stars. I'm curious to see where things will go... more of this story please?"

i both enjoyed and hated the part of "The Story" that focuses on the husband's involvement with Grace's work and interactions with the students, and the part with Eleanor.

Grace's work and interactions with the students, as well as the passage with Eleanor. where does the husband's fantasy go? a sequel Thank you.

@panhandlefreak and @eafaT - thanks for your comments. Yes, I hope to follow up on the story in the near future potentially incorporating a new twist. Want to finish off another storyline first.

@eafaT, interesting that you picked up on the part with Eleanor and the students. I had originally intended that as a launch point for a substantive subplot but decided that it would be too much for the chapter.

Thank you, too. Actually, that sequence would have been a bit too much for the beginning of this story, and too much for Grace. I also thought that Grace had guessed her husband's game and let him do it... and what will happen next? will he play out his fantasy with Eleanor and Kyle's father as well as Grace...?