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Click here"You did so incredibly well, little one and I couldn't be more proud of you."
He surprised me then by reaching down and pressing two fingertips directly against my clitoris firmly but yet He didn't move and I gasped aloud. "All I want from you in this moment is to focus on the contact between My fingers and your sex. Remain completely still but keep your focus on that singular place until you cum for Me."
I couldn't even think straight to object and I found that even through all of my prior distress the pressure point He created on my clitoris occupied my entire focus and within moments of the quiver in my belly I had no memory of pain.
"There you go, little one, embrace it and cum for Me." I was quickly coming apart at the seams and the dam burst as the same moment that He looked me directly in the eyes while pressing his forward to mine, and simply said. "Cum for Me, now."
I half moaned and half screamed as my pleasure overwhelmed every one of my senses and He remained still waiting for me to come back down from my high. As my body was still wracked with the aftershocks of orgasm, I could no longer keep my eyes open and Master pulled me down onto the bed next to Him and pulled me into His chest with one final command.
"Sleep."
- COMMENTS
LittleOne14385about 10 years agoAuthorYes FindMyWay,
Grace is still pregnant and taking that into consideration I've understood in the past a glass isn't terrible otherwise I wouldn't have included it at all. Don't worry that'll be a fun aspect I'll play with more later on :)
Thank you again to everyone for commenting. I don't expect everyone to agree, Masterful Jim but I do still appreciate you reading.
Masterfuljimabout 10 years agoAs a regular poster often says...we bitch because we care.
I do however stand by my comments...HE lost control...end of.
It is his responsibility to keep her Safe...nobody else's
Findmywayabout 10 years agothanks for the clarification LittleOne....this is helpful. While reading the story my perspective was very different than what you shared.
One other point....you highlight in Ch. 04 (???) that Grace is pregnant. Is she still? Just wondering since she was gulping down the wine.... :-)
LittleOne14385about 10 years agoAuthorThank you everyone for taking the time time to read and comment. I see the points on both side of the perspective and while I know that everyone will not always see my vision or agree with it I can appreciate that not every chapter or story will be largely received with open arms per se.
My vision with Wendy in this chapter was to show Master implying that He wanted the trip to the bathroom to be fun for Grace, if it went there. This He did by allowing Wendy a glimpse of the butt plug. To allow a bit of fun, it's safe to assume that He would allow them some together before feeling that the need arises to go check on them.
The fact that Wendy is inexperienced and misunderstood the dynamic between Master and Grace was to show that not every adventure is going to end up being ideal. This is meant as a learning situation for Grace to know that as Master tells her at home that "just because she is a submissive is doesn't grant everyone the opportunity to be Dominant over her".
Lastly my choice to have Him choose to take her home rather than to the emergency room is rooted in keeping her embarrassment to a minimum and allowing Him an opportunity to be her release, her healing, and her Master. All of those things He was not allowed the opportunity to be after her initial attack in "Grace's Release, Ch 1: First Wounds".
All in all I stand by Master and Grace and I hope that you will continue to read on!
Masterfuljimabout 10 years agoRemoving the butt plug from the glass in full view of the waitress Master pressed it into my palm, and whispered softly to her. "Now, Wendy, my little one over there is not feeling so well. Would you mind escorting her to the ladies room to make sure she arrives safely?"
She nodded in agreement before He had even finished speaking, then after helping me to stand, she allowed me to lean against her as we made our way to the single toilet restroom.
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devoid of emotion as I told Him all that had occurred in the apparent half hour I'd been in the ladies room with Wendy.
SplendidSpunkabout 10 years agoI've read this Chapter a few times and fail to see that Master sent Wendy anywhere. As I read the tale Wendy goes to the ladies and finds Grace who is holding the plug. I read that Grace may have assumed that Wendy was sent, because of the "maybe someday" comment at the table but noting above in the words so well written justify the supposed outrage below. A half an hour, where is that? This is a wonderful example of Love that happens to include a Dom/sub portion. If you can't handle the emotion shown then wipe your own eyes, but don't blame the author because you don't enjoy a tender moment.
FA_JFabout 10 years agoLittleone, I've been enjoying this story, but must agree this is an epic master fail. He had already involved Wendy in their play at the table. He told Grace a few moments earlier that maybe they could include Wendy further and praises Grace for being so good in going with everything. He sent them off the the ladies room with the plug and no specific direction and then waits 30 minutes to check on them. And he is SHOCKED! and ANGRY! Chucklehead.
Given Grace's traumatic background, including ANY other person is iffy. To include a stranger and to not be there to supervise? Tsk. He says he didn't intend what happened, but it was not unforeseen, given the situation. His bad. That master did not recognize HIS part in this clusterfuck is worrisome. This could/should be a learning experience for both of them. No relationship is without it's oops moments, so this can be useful.
It's your story and still a good one that I want to continue. Not everyone will agree with my opinion. Take all feedback and grow with it. :)
Anonymousabout 10 years agoSorry, but this story took me back to my nursing days and some time spent in ER, have been through this scenario with patients having 'objects' retrieved from the anus, another sorry but one 'patient' did not get any sympathy and probably heard the mirth coming from the nurses station. Reality gets in the way of a lot of BDSM fantasy.
Masterfuljimabout 10 years agoThe so called master I am talking about.
It was HIM who fucked up...not Wendy.
What did he expect the girl to do with the butt plug? Play skittles with it ?
He sends her off with a complete stranger who is also a novice to the BDSM world, with something that is obviously too large for her, and then gets angry when his toy is damaged !!...huh...go figure as they say.
And if he was that concerned about her being in too much pain and being damaged, then he should have taken her straight to A&E to have it removed, not done a good old DIY effort at home.
Do you still trust me he asks...yes she replies, with my life.
PMSL ...I'm not sure who is the most deluded of the pair.
