All Comments on 'Graded Pt. 01'

Amazing start of a great story. Please continue if you have more.

HOT story!!!! Go on soon, please ;)

This was great! I don't normally go for mpov, but I gotta say, Femdom gets me going.

Great start! It's pretty obvious what was going to happen to this guy, but you did a really good job of making his actions and reactions realistic (within the bounds of suspended disbelief, of course). The next chapter or two, should you choose to write and post them, will really make or break the story. But so far, it's really strong. I hope you keep up with it!

Thank you all for the support! This is my first story so hopefully the chapters will get better as the story progresses. Probably around halfway into the next chapter so be on the lookout for that!

Excellent story! You're really good at building up tension. I hope you can keep going with this!

Any update on when we might see more of this story? The first part was amazing!

Excellent start and build up. Keep going

Well, a very good start to this theme. I know that there is already a second chapter but I would have liked to have a little more background of this Femstate society. I like that his reactions are plausible which makes the story more readable.