by 32aa
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Not every chapter has to have sex in it. This chapter gives us a window into the developing relationship between Bill and Rita and their growing fondness (is fondness the right word?) for each other. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Late to the party go'er here . I'll be happy to comment . I have been enjoying the nostalgic reminiscing of my memories as well as enjoying your character building . It isn't a surprise to be enjoying this well written simple tale . Well done .