by 32aa
I agree with the first commenter
Being 18, spending time alone, and having sex with a girl friend--what better memory can I think of?
This is the best-written lovemaking scene I have read in over 60 years of enjoying erotica writing. I mean the BEST -- Miller, Nabokov and those other great pretenders included. This chapter should be required reading for all the wannabee writers of "erotica" who think repetition after repetition of the same old blow job-lick 'em
-fuck' em-protest love, then repeat ad nausea constitutes art.
Bravo!
Read and learn, guys and gals and non-cis scriveners; this is the real deal.