All Comments on 'Grandma Jolene keeps the Faith Ch. 02'

by MackKnifely

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too short

you can do better than that

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Short but inducing!

Enjoy reading it. Looking forward to the ch. 2

lovesexyshoeslovesexyshoesover 3 years ago
More..

Yes, to short, maybe a tease for is what to cum....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
1 out of three

She has two more holes you haven't used yet. I'll bet that 61 year old virgin asshole is nice and tight and she has a mouth that talks to much.. She needs to serve all of your needs.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

WTF! This was hardly the effort, and for a second chapter, it sucked. By the way, get yourself an editor, because you can't seem to recognize your grammar errors. I'm not sure I will look for further chapters after reading this.

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