by MackKnifely
I am truly loving this story, Mack. Please continue it.
The story is losing its sizzle. It was very hot at first because of the reluctance, but now it’s like they are dating.
That boy needs to eat poor Jolene’s pussy!!! And ignore the comments about the story losing its sizzle. I LOVE every bit of it. (Although I wish she hadn’t dyed her hair.)
What I especially like about this story is the juxtaposition between religious overbearing conservative posturing which has been thickly layered over a lifetime of need desire and want. And all it takes to peel away those layers and expose the nasty slutty woman who wants to come out in the worst way is a cocky young boy who is very good at manipulating her chosen language of biblical verse to get her to understand that he more than her is the master to which she willingly becomes the submissive.
I really like the last chapter because as I was reading through the previous three it was becoming very obvious to me he had to start to understand and embrace the humanness of his grandmother as well as the wonderful loving nature and nurture she can provide.
I sincerely hope you have several more chapters in mind because so far it has been an outstanding story. Would really enjoy reading to follow Jake as he and Jolene are able to manipulate one or two of the other Bible group women to join in.
amazing story. Always had a thing for my grandmother. Just to try to steal glimpses up under her dress when I was little . Seeing her girdle and garters and hose. and her humongous tits! I just wanted to lick her all over. More please......