All Comments on 'Grandpa's Guide to Women Pt. 06'

While I continue to honor your work with 5-star ratings, there is one element that continues to diminish your level of achievement, and that is the difference between "to lie" and "to lay" (and, presumably, the same difference between "to rise" and "to raise"). Perhaps you would benefit from the assistance of a skilled editor.

Five stars! As always, the stories in this series are very well written, with hot sex and a plot that evolves with every chapter. I'd like to see a sequel that tells us what Grandpa Frank was like when he was Ben's age. He must have been very popular with the coeds when he was a student. And I'm getting curious about Grandma. She must have been a real firecracker to end up with a guy like Frank. Why don't you write a story that tells us how they got together?