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menon61menon613 months ago

Good story, Pease continue. Like that you inject a little humor into the story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Seems to have no direction and just wanders.

Burnt_NjalBurnt_Njal3 months agoAuthor

Anonymous - you are correct, there is no direction and the story does wander. This is intentional. There is no plot or story arc. Each chapter is a vignette that takes place in the scenery of Green Cay College. If you’re looking for the overall story to have a destination, a beginning, a middle and an end, you will be disappointed. Instead the point is to set up one erotic scene after another, building the characters and the stage as the scenes go by.

StewarttrigStewarttrig3 months ago

Could use some editing

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The stories here are an attempt to learn to write narrative. I have written a lot of technical stuff, and some humorous vignettes, but nothing with dialog or a storyline. We’ll see if it works.

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