All Comments on 'Grim Shorts for Bad Nights - Sam I am'

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zededd2000zededd200012 months ago

This goes from a rather curious and character-evolving story to an almost tacked on 'ending' that honestly doesn't have much to do with anything before.

It is far to jarring for narrative, and too short to be enjoyed. One underwhelming paragraph does not justify a tag.

If this were an intro to prelude to a loss of sanity as she merges her past and present, sure. But as it stands, it's like two intros crammed together.

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