All Comments on 'Ground Rules Pt. 01'

Nice!

Thank you for writing and posting here.

I loved it.

The story is well written and pushes my buttons.

5 stars, easy.

Hot encounter, a little hard to believe but perhaps that doesn't matter. The acts that took place showed some restraint which was fitting for the kind of person she turned out to be. My only issue was the changing of tense (switching between past and present), mostly in the first half. A bit more proofing next time and you can have a winner

What a wonderful story! It is so hot and the woman is really in charge, she will never need such bloody things like chastity cages to keep him in line. She just uses her skills to keep him devoted to her, that is real supremacy! Thanks for sharing, hope there will be a next part?