by Bearclaw88
That's not a penis: It's a belt. And fake tits that weigh 20 pounds apiece? At least make an attempt to seem plausible. One star, only because I can't vote lower than that.
I love where this is going! Stories like this that explore fantasy are so welcome. Not everything needs to be realistic :) Push the boundaries!
thanks for keeping this alive, dude! I love how you are developing this story, over four fronts. I'm not so much into huge asses but I loved this part too. And I can't wait for the next one. CompeTITion is always nice. Also, I hope mom will come back soon, maybe with her younger sister (and her twin daughters...;-)) just to add more meat to the fire... (just an idea, don't worry ;-))
Don't listen to the criticism, your stuff is great and I hope you continue writing more
Thank you everyone for the positive feedback. It helps keep me going with the story and I'm glad that you like it so far. New ideas are also welcome and I have a decent start on the next chapter!