All Comments on 'Growing Relationships'

by Ragnarok385

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AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

With the amount of changes to each characters, I wish this was a comic or have accompanying illustrations.

Ragnarok385Ragnarok38526 days agoAuthor

It would be great to have illustrations, sadly I have zero art skills. Hopefully I did a good enough job describing them that you can imagine it easily :)

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Oh man, Ragnarok, so good to see ya writing again. I really enjoy this “game makes you grow” format that you do. Would have loved to read one more sex scene at the end but if that is not your way, I respect that. Hope to see more!

OppreciatorOppreciator9 days ago

Absolutely loved the growth throughout this story, though sadly it seems the curse of formatting struck as the lists of cards played became a little bit hard to parse at times with the lack of punctuation. I also wish there was a sex scene to properly cap off the story where they got to actually use their new bodies!

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