All Comments on 'Growing up in Rural Arkansas Ch. 02'

Loved the story

Based on a true story

I really loved the story, but a couple details were distracting. First you did not have to have credit cards for a motel in the 60s. They weren't really even a thing until the 50s, and it took a few decades for them to become widely used. Most places well into the 80s or even 90s took cash.

Second, of course you couldn't afford satellite. There was no such thing. There was not even cable until the mid 70s.

Again, this was a really good story, and I hope to see more. It's just that little details like this can distract one from an otherwise excellent tale.

Dewey Cheatham

I got really turned on reading this

Hot!

Not sure about where previous commenter was discussing 1950/60/70's. If Betty's video was when she was 19-20, thus nearly 14 years previous, it would likely be from approx 1980 when video recorders became something available to average homeowners. Video cameras for recording in early 1980's were enormous and very very expensive. Would put time frame for this story early 1990's. At this time few people were owning PC's at home. 386 processer pc, but few had Dial up internet. A dirty picture of poor quality would take 15 minutes to download. Oh the exciting development of Internet porn. Was there with desk wipe kit from the start.

The video tape of Betty being naughty would have probably been recorded mid to late 80s meaning that the time-line for this tale needs to be mid to late 90s. VHS tapes were pretty much history by the turn of the millennium. So some of the technology used in this story kinda stretches the imagination in order to buy into the story. 🤔

The same screw up surrounding the word "socially" was repeated yet again. Even people in Arkansas use the word "socialize" correctly.

I didn't really enjoy the way that it basically turned into an orgy without any emotional connections happening between the characters. 😕 That was a huge let down. 3/5

to the "mathematician" and sirwoodcutter, I was born in 68, graduated high school in 86. School had a computer, we played Oregon trail on, 2 5" floppy disc, no one I knew had one in the house. Not sure if even the school had internet then. Betty is 14 years older than me, mom was 31 years older than me

also, BASED on a true story but it's still a story, things have to be changed

This second chapter seemed to be written much better, either you took the 'comment' advise from chapter one or you have gotten much better in your writing. Either way's fine, think about or make up some other life experiences and warp them into a good sexy story.