All Comments on 'GSA Ch. 01'

Excellent start. can't wait to see more!

Great story, can't wait for ch.2

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great start........

so far, so good, but.... seems to be a build up to a whole lot of incestuous sex and can't wait for that part....

Part 2 asap please

"Between her muscular legs, a trimmed triangle of pubic hair." Pussies without hair favor plucked chickens and thanksgiving turkeys. Great job!

Very well written, very engaging, superb flow. Doesn't get much better than that. Made me hit that 'Follow' button.

Five stars, of course!

I really like this and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Well done.

Part 2! I'm like Carl, I love A, B & small C cups over huge udders. Soooooooo damned sexy. Such a shame Deb has been fixed. 5☆

This has been great so far. The way you are telling the story through all the individual characters is not easy but you are doing it so well. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

A very well done beginning. Almost like reading a regular book story as opposed to something posted online. Nice cliffhanger just as it starts getting to the hot stuff. Can't wait for chapter 2.

This has all the hallmarks of the best story I have ever read on this site! Good grammar, perfect spelling and continuity, and well-written sexploits ... who could ask for more?

Absolutely first class!!