by TheDarkCloud
This is nonsense. He hates her too much. The main character is pathetic - holding a grudge for that long, its too unbelievable for this to be good erotica. Work on your characters. At least you have good grammar though.
Every male loves a great revenge story, especially one in which he was shot down by the young, haughty bitch in high school. I'm left wondering how she came to such an ignominious fate....
I swear, every one of your piss stories is simply the best thing on the site. It drives me crazy. Even some of the stuff I personally think goes a little far, is just so inventive. Well done.
This is the first of the pissmop stories that I read (and masturbated to). Great story.
-- Maria
You'll win your bet then. She is coming back and for a cheaper fee.
A thousand dollars seems a little excessive to pay a slut. I would have done it for much less. She'll come back for more, so you can drop the price.
would love to see a second part where that bitch gets a lot of scat over her full tits and face