All Comments on 'Had to Sale Wife to Keep in School'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

"...But then Andrew pulled back more and his cock slipped out of her hole and into my mouth. Immediately I pulled back. They all laughed and Andrew said "oops, I must have pulled out too far. Sorry man. That won't happen again." And he pushed my head back towards Angela's pussy with one hand as he guided his cock into her hole with the other.

He was fucking her a little faster and I was licking her when it happened again. He slipped out and into my mouth. This time he held my head so his cock stayed in my mouth..." —

This time I reached under the bed and pulled out my Louisville Slugger, real American Hickory! A friend had suggested getting it for apartment defense. I found out it would work for offense too! I bunted Andrew on the forehead and he fell back with an "Oof!" Next I stood over him and swung the Slugger down with two hands like I was digging a trench with a heavy hoe. One whack between Andrew's thighs right on his hardballs, "Strike one!", I declared. This was quickly followed up with strikes two and three, upon which I declared Andrew "Out!"

I explained to the others Andrew's breaching of the rules of etiquette and common decency, as he had initiated sexual contact with me without my consent. Then I told the two younger guys watching that they had enough of a show and to see Andrew home. Between his sobs of pain I told Andrew that he should not come back, ever again, unless he wanted to experience real Ukrainian retribution for his blatant disrespect of me and my wife. After all, we allowed him into our home for a business deal, not for his humiliation and disrespectful attitude. I stressed the nature of this to Randy and Fred, they said they understood and would impress that on Andrew as well.

Fixed your story. Not on board with the themes. Racism, interracial sex, humiliation, stupid deals with stupid people. You had the same common editorial mistakes as other Lit stories so it comes down to likable or not. Which is essentially how the star system is configured. So yeah I read it, how else does it get a critique? You want a bunch of yes men readers?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Remarkable piece of writing from someone whose first language isn’t English. There were a few errors, but there are more in stories written by English speakers. The end was a bit rushed, and I missed how the bit about giving Randy a lift home fitted in, but overall a good read.

RuthMRuthMabout 1 month ago

Great story forget the negative comments

Certainly had my pussy wet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

loved the story. thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

@LustyScribe

"This in spite of the fact that the vast majority of THEM probably can't form a coherent paragraph in another language." - I do not argue this point. Instead, I will simply point out that fact is why I would not attempt to publish in another language without the help of a translator and native speaking editor. I realize that the volunteer editors program here is fraught with issues, as I've been waiting a while for even the courtesy of a "Sorry, I'm too busy to assist you" message, but it is an option if you really want to publish in a language you are not proficient enough in.

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"Then of course there are those who consistently come read cuckold stories then bash writers for writing the very stories they came to read. Those folks...I don't get." - It amazes me the number of people who 1) don't understand that BTB stories contain the same elements as RAAC. It's the reaction to that stimulus that determines which type of story it is, not the stimulus itself. Then, 2), they also fail to understand the concepts of skimming and skipping. Just because somebody reads enough to determine they hate it and then give it an honest 1* rating does not mean they read every word. Many come here to read about the struggle and triumph of the victimized husband, not the struggle and triumph of the cheap slag or her "alpha" bull. On a side note, what kind of woman deliberately applies the term "cow" to herself? I mean, cows are what bulls fuck, after all...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Enters story of a loving couple in a desperate situation. A friends two cousins moved out to Vegas many years ago before it became the hot spot of parties. The worked in hotels but pay wasn’t enough and were approached by a as he told me an extremely charismatic black guy who told them he could help them make lots of money with higher income guys and famous people. Apparently these two lily white innocent girls did it and supposedly the guy gave them. 75 percent with a random night with him for free and sometimes it would only be just a night out . Supposedly they did this for six years . The only problem they had was a two full day/night for some serious cash they told him with Middle East oil guys . It was supposed to be two guys with them two but they allowed there workers to fuck them as well. It wound up being sever people total and more than that they told there cousin it was they were treated pretty badly . No trying to hurt them but treated them like pets , tried to get them to go with each other but they obviously refused, had them crawl like pets , ass fucking them a lot and as they showered them had them lay in the big shower and all pissed on them which was so degrading. They didn’t do anything after that for a month and said only famous people or someone where there is a bit more control. He said they will never give names but over those six years many very very famous names many of which were married. One of them actually got married the last years they were still doing this and the other was engaged. They slowly stoped and had plenty of money invested to live off of with there secrets in the past . They are still friends with the guy that got them in the business and he’s buddy buddy with there husband’s if they only knew not only they worked for him but fucked him dozens of time but never once they were married. There favorite guys were a group of athletes that had huge house in Caribbean with a week of fun . He said he could figure out there clients but the many signed pics and memorabilia

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wow, that killed my hard-on.

AmbulAmbulabout 1 month ago

Wow, I just read the other companion story and this one is very different. Apparently Angela and her husband got deep into group sex. And then she became an “expensive escort but that was just for fun.” So Angela does get off being a cock-loving whore. Apparently once her husband made it in business, she no longer needed to do that for the money. But she continued for a “just for fun but only for a couple of times.” There is little reason for her not to continue to fuck other men, for free as an insatiable slut or for money as an escort, most likely with hubby’s knowledge and support. There seem to be few inhibitions with this couple. I would have loved to read a follow-up story on their further sexual adventures.

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First I wrote some stories from my wife and I's personal experiences. Then, since I am a Marriage councillor, I wrote some of the stories I have heard from my clients. Of course I changed the names, locations, and key identifying facts. But for the more part, all are as factua...