by Samuelx
Stop writing on Literotica and push ALL your Black Supremacy stories to other sites.All your stories are bores.
Race, race, race, race, race . . .
If we took all the reference to race, racism and general obsession with race out of your stories, would there be anything left?
(Yes, I left exactly the same comment on your other story as well, but then all your stories are exactly the same, so that's fair, right?)
While I have to disagree with the statement that your stories are about black supremacy, because at least this one isn't, I will say that unfortunately they're not very compelling given the site you're submitting to. This site is for stories that feature either romance or eroticism. This reads more like an essay on cultural differences. It doesn't really fit here.