All Comments on 'Halloween Blackmail'

by DevlinMea

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago
Instant Lesbianism

The blackmailed woman seemed not to be too bothered and of course , apparently it is not acceptable (PC in a sex story?)for a character to say I am not a lesbian or I am not like that in a story so the perfunctory resistance doesn't work, here in this story, as a heterosexual woman would have verbalized the above objection.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great tale. You should find a way to work Ruth in there. Have Anne maybe lick her too so she can get over the trauma of Anne doing that to her little girl. She could be the family's little lesbian fuck toy. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Confusing read at times, hurts the story's flow but for a third story its is good. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Sorry about the confusing read comment that was for another story. Thanks and keep up the good work.

PappasleazePappasleaze5 months ago

good story. by the 5 time she will be all in . Maybe you could even work ruth in as another balackmailer. or mayne even have Emmanuelle spread for her mom. 4 stars

FitDad16FitDad165 months ago

Fuckong great story! Get mom involoved soon too for a taboo threesome!

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