by creativeboyinspring
I really enjoyed this story for several reasons... the main character is rude and insulting in the beginning, so we immediately dislike her and are hoping for her demise. Then, when she is taken captive, her abuse is just the right balance of humiliation, sexual subjugation and 'mild' punishment, (not severe), and also many involuntary orgasms. All of this being in full view of many groups of people, who are enjoying the spectacle as part of the haunted house is a brilliant twist to the story. The perfect punishment for her bad behavior. ...perhaps she will feel compelled to return to the haunted house on another night, either seeking justice, or to identify the perpetrators, or a subconscious desire to relive the experience again. .
I have been thinking about a similar scenario involving an alien abduction fun house... in which some guests are taken into a secret back room.
I have to wonder about her friends who left Kim behind - no one bothered to help her and she was thoroughly fucked by the three men.
What will happen to Kim? A truck will come where Kim will be handcuffed and kept hogtied to be driven to unknown locations as she is trained to pleasurize customers with money as she remembers Hailey who left her behind and kept her expensive jewelry for herself.
Well...guess I'm adding a Haunted House fantasy to my roleplay list...!
Cool story. For the person who wondered about her friends-- the only way this story made sense, to me, was that it was a nightmare.
Given the halloween theme, my view that the three men weren't actually human but probably something like a demon given how they behaved (not reacting at all to what seemed like bones being broken, for one), how gratuitously mean Kim is for no reason at the start, etc.
Anyways, cool story. You've done really good with this Halloween series.