All Comments on 'Halloween Party'

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Saqwana1Saqwana1over 4 years ago
cute

this was so cute i want more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

I loved the story. Only suggestion I have is working on grammar here and there and a little bit of sentence structure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love the story. Wish that would happen to myself, would love to have someone whose loving yet a bit kinky and dominate. Plz I would lovd to see a follow up to see how the relationship builds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lot of spelling & grammar mistakes

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very, very erotic, if I were younger, I would welcome a relationship just like this.

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I love being creative in writing. I love to read, my topics of reading are supernatural, mythology, urban fantasy, and fantasy. I love tattoos and I am a huge animal lover. I do hope you love my works