All Comments on 'Halloween Party'

by Vampiregirl986

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Initially it was a good story, but I was disappointed with the situation of her fucking her best friend’s husband. She could be forgiven for the first time because he basically forced himself on her but there’s no forgiveness for a repeat performance.

For me that interlude spoiled the story. More details on the 3some would have been good. Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

Vampiregirl986Vampiregirl986over 2 years agoAuthor

Think you I will keep that in mind for other stores. Have a great New Year

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