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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please get an editor or at least proof read your stories, too many obvious mistakes. Good luck.

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Welcome. So first of English is not my first language. If you find any errors, grammatik mistakes or whatever, please let me know. I'd like to improve my writing and pointing out the mistakes I make will help me. Thank you.