All Comments on 'Halloween with Mom Pt. 09'

As you said, a little below your quality, but still good to have one more story from you. Do continue writing though.

Keep it up story’s great

Not enough stars. This deserves at least 6, maybe 7. Great story arc, good pacing, believable dialogue, thanks.

5*

Tc

Loved the wedding and new man-wife baby making scenes. Another chapter with the positive preg test, doctor confirmation, and sprouting baby bump needs written. He needs to start calling her by name sometimes too.

Thanks for finishing it, I have been looking forward to it.

Nice job.

Wow, a beautiful love story, Vicky and Luke are now a wife and a husband and now she surely will be pregnant, she will be even more insanely hot when her tummy starts to grow.

It was a long wait to be able to read this, but it was worth the wait, please write more and thank you very much! It is without a doubt the best love in the world between a mom and her son, this made my week so much better!

Extremely well written- you have really.captured the love between Luke and Victoria- well done

well written, with the right amount of emotion

Awesome, can't wait for the next part. Thanks

What a wonderful series. Keep up the great work.

Love this story, thank you

Excellent series. Can't wait for more. 5 stars and more. The only confusing thing in all this is how Luke could officiate Rachel's wedding. Did I miss something?

Well written.

But, if we look at it realistically, they did move fast.

Halloween to Thanksgiving is less than a month.

Mom went from (not so) secretly seducing her son to planning a baby in that time?

I don't know, not If she had the willpower to resist her son for a long (but unstated, perhaps years...before he became legal) period of time, she would have wanted to take the relationship a bit slow.

If not for her sake, than for her son's ...i.e. making sure he was 1000% onboard for a lifetime relationship and not just in lust.

After all, she should know that sooner or later,he may want a younger woman and a public relationship/marriage/family.

Heck, we all like unbridled lust.

Been there, done that.

But you took some care to make this somewhat believable...and her a caring mom, not a mindless sex addict.

So, given all that, I think the timeframe is a bit rushed.

Having said that, any sequels planned?

@Niceguy2000 Thanks for the detailed comment. I know the story is a little rushed. I just wanted to make a holiday themed kind of story. Beginning with Halloween, Proposal at Thanksgiving, Wedding for Christmas, more to come for Luke's birthday in Jan and possibly something interesting for Valentine's day. I have tried to make the accelerated timeline as believable as possible, but maybe i have fallen a little short. Hope you liked the story though, you wouldn't care about this detail otherwise.

I love stories in which a young man makes his mother pregnant. I hope Luke succeeds in impregnating his mother Victoria.

Maxillodragon...

I didn't intend to be too critical.

I like realistic stories, so the time element is important. But I appreciate that one has to move the story along to maintain reader interest.

I have no doubt my story, which I have been writing for months, will be so drawn out no one will read it!

You have done an extraordinary job, the series is well done and very engaging.

Also, very high scores for a new writer.

I can only hope my story is as successful!

Brilliant work, loving every word of it - enjoying their journey together from mom son to being married, can’t wait for Luke to impregnate his mom wife and enjoy hot wild sex as she continues to carry his baby inside her - and what turn on it would be for him to be able to drink from her breasts once again as she lactates because of the babies he makes with her.

Love this, I can only hope to see another Halloween chapter where Victoria uses her Catwoman costume to consume their anniversary. Maybe pretending that they do not know each other to recreate their first time. Regardless of whether or not you make something like that, this is by far the best romance I've seen on this site

Is.there a.missing cjapter.between 8 and 9?

I have to say..You definitely know how to keep your readers engaged! No slow poke type stuff that just drags out forever with unrealistic non sense...You truly have a gift in your writing and I enjoy the Hell outta reading them. Fantastic job and look up and smile because you do have what it takes to be a well known author. Also something else I want to add, in your story's, you have the reader fully pulled in to the story as if we were standing right beside the characters and witnessing the outcome of the events, or I can only say for myself that the story reached out and held me in with it's eroticism. I can't wait to read your next story's, you are now in my top 3 authors and you just now started writing..Fucking AWESOME!! Now a follower and 5🌟's doesn't do it enough justice...😉😉

I loved the story. I enjoyed the romance between the mother and her son. The sex was wild and crazy. I love it when a man asks his woman...."I don't want you on birth control".

I never had a relationship with my mother like the couples in this story. I did have a relationship with my older sister that started in my freshman year in high school, and she was in her senior year. It was me that approached her.

I told her that I thought she was the most beautiful girl in school and that the man in me wanted to know her as a man knows a woman. Sexually.

I told her that if we were lovers that I could never reveal to anyone that we were in fact lovers. I logic that I always loved her and protected her and if ever were to become lovers that I would love her that much more. I had this little business of selling premium marijuana to a high-end clientele. I made up to $500.00 a week. Elena knew about it and never had a problem asking me of money. I told her to please just give it some thought. I suggested that we go to a drive-in move on a pretend date. We could pretend to be a couple of teenagers going out on a date. And if she felt that she couldn't go through with it...I would not hold any anger towards her and would never bring it up again.

A few weeks after I approached Elena, said that she had thought about what I said but she just wasn't sure of what to do. She couldn't trust any boy in school to have sex with because she knew he would blab to all of his friends and that would kill her. She knew that I always had her back and if there was anybody who she trusts it would be me. But we were brother and sister and she had apprehensions about that. I suggested that go out on a date. We could tell our mother that a couple of kids from school were going to the drive-in. Mom said that it was OK to go the drive-in. Two weeks later we drove to the drive-in. It was only Elena and me. I picked a drive-in far from our community to ensure that no one recognized us. I also chose a parking spot removed from the main crowd. When the movie started, I ask Elena to slide over closer to me. Turning her head toward me, I said:

"We are just two teenagers on a date at the drive-in doing what teenagers do at a drive-in. If at any time you want to stop, please tell me Elena and I promise you that I will stop. And I will not be angry with you. Sadden, yes, but not angry...OK?" Elena nodded her head up and down saying "OK".

Bringing my mouth to her's I gently kissed her mouth. I didn't want to scare her off, so I was not rushing anything. Very gently I slid my tongue into my sister's mouth. Out tongues met and they began to dance with each other. I thought this was a good sign. I was French kissing my older sister. Within a few minutes Elena was moaning in my mouth. I knew right then and there that we would become lovers. All through the movie we traded spit. Breaking our kiss, I whispered into sister's mouth:

"If we do this Elena, I won't share you with anyone. You will be my woman and I will be your man. I am not in this for a one-night stand. Will we be exclusive to each other. If you can't go along with this, then I'll drive us home."

Putting her hand behind my head and bringing it back to her mouth she whispered:

"I want a man who who will not cheat on me and a man I can trust Tomas. If I give myself to you it will be 100% and I will accept only the same to the man I give myself to."

We went back to sucking on each other's tongues.

A month later in Big Bear Lake I took my sister's virginity and we became a couple. Needless to say we could never broadcast our love for each other in public. But we finished our schooling and both got upper graduate degrees. It's been twenty years since I first approach Elena and now we live in Mexico. Elena has given me three beautiful sons and three beautiful daughter.

I often wonder how wide spread incest is in the world. Which is more common....relationships between fathers and daughter, mothers and sons, brother and sisters, aunts and nephews, uncles and nieces. If I was a betting man I would say fathers and their daughters.

Awesome 5⭐️ series,,, this needs to continue even if only one more story,,, kind of like and epilogue to finish it off. I kinda figured that her boss Clare is her online chat buddy,,, the only thing that has me wondering is that he never uses her first name,, it’s only mom

5⭐️

maxillodragon,

When you bite into a story, you really do it well, Maxillo Dragon.

I just wish I could give you 100 stars, for this story.

This was great fun, using the holidays as goal posts.

I'm guessing Clair is her online incectious pregnant friend?

And I'm dying for our hero to talk to Megan son,

and convince him to make a move on his Mother as well.

Meg is so ready, for the fucking of a lifetime!

We all know that when a woman want to be pregnant,

it's going to happen, and I'm sure there's a Libra baby,

thoroughly impregnated inside Vicky's womb.

I'm looking forward to Megan being accidently pregnant,

and work being a welcoming nursery. With young fathers

stopping by for some family loving, and lots of tension relief.

I'm thinking Vicky might get her Mother hired, as the full time

office baby sitter, and the 3 Moms decide it's time she felt the

love they do, and ask their sons to give her the affections she

been missing. Having been with women in their 70's, they're

very happy when love is shown their way, and quiet beautifull!

Thanks again.

Please write more of this growing circle of family, and friends.

WB

when can we expect part 10?

I love this series. I believe you could do so much more with them. I like the fact that they did not include others into there love life and just enjoyed eachother. There are not enough of those types of stories. You are a good writer. Please continue witting.

It wasn't that bad of series though it feels left unfinished such as is Clair really the chick that she was talking to online and doesn't know and do they tell Megan or does she already know some how and does she get pregnant and how will the grandmother take the news that her daughter is married to her grandson and is having his child all that should be explored and more

A great story though I feel like there is more to be said. A few loose ends to tie up. The whole Claire situation, Megan and her son, the future for Victoria - pregnancy, future children, do they move to live a "normal" life? At least an epilogue please! This ending feels a little too soon :(

The next part is due.

I’ve missed this story line so much. 5 Stars.

Great story. Love how Luke and Victoria are progressing in their relationship. Maybe dial up some of the sex. Completely use the bodies, maybe a little kid kinky sex. So many ways to jazz it up a little.

Great Story. You only need to continue the main story line.