All Comments on 'Halo Ch. 04'

i just adore this series.

Amazing once again :)

Cant wait for the rest!

Good luck with the writing,

JC

I'm so happy that that Janey is staying the night and that Brad can have more time with Nicky. AND I'm happy Janey is friendlier with Tanaya. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for the new chapter, it's great to see how Ren takes care of Janey but doesn't overpower her.

And I hope that Adam is going to stay away for a long time (like ever), because he makes her afraid of her surroundings all the time like he needs to feel strong and keeps her small. Hope she is secretly talking the pill because she doesn't want another baby just now.

Hope to see more of Janey and Ren soon.

I love this story. I have waited and followed from the being. BUT.... It is dragging. Don't seem to be going anywhere. I would love to see something exciting happien before I am 6 feet under.

PLEASE have Janey and Ren get together soon!!! The teasing is driving me nuts.

Still a fan of your writing -

and their plans leave a lot of room for improvement. TK U MLJ LV NV

Considering that's what he called while she was being held captive by men who raped and beat her I don't find it 'sweet' at all. I can just imagine the reminiscences this gang will have when Nicky is older and asking about how they all met.

How could you not love Ren he is such a caring man god love im!