All Comments on 'Handy'

by Elaine_Mature

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u4 months ago

Damn those nerds :) Definitely made for each other. Fun sexy story

BruceWoBruceWo4 months ago

A lovely story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

Not nearly enough foreplay/preliminaries.

Moved too fast to cock in pussy.

Needed much more atention to her breasts. Her nipples. Her clit.

Needed much more attention to his cock and balls.

Three stars.

Ravey19Ravey194 months ago

Lovely build up but a little too fast through the foreplay and into sex. Could have spent more time with her breasts and clitoris. Still good enough.

lexlogan8lexlogan84 months ago

I liked the pacing -- two inexperienced people getting aroused quickly, neither knew enough to slow things down. Five stars.

HardBenHardBen4 months ago

Really loved this story. Beautifully romantic as well.

toolbox0toolbox04 months ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's a great premise and should have It's own genre tag.

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what to call it, but it features three young women catching a ride with a farm boy, headed for the big c...