All Comments on 'Hannah Ch. 01'

Good beginning!

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Very nice! Thanks

Good premise.

Rushed.

Needed, before the sex began, her asking him about what he liked about her body? Does he ever masturbate to fantasies of her? How often? What does he imagine doing to/with her? What does he imagine she does to/with him?

Does he watch porn? What kind? What kind of women does he most like to watch? Thin? Fat? Big boobs? Small?

I can see the bulge in your pants. Take it out and show it to me. Show me how you play with it.

Four stars.

Solid story development - 5*

Fun, fabulous and erotic story. Falling in love a having sex with an older woman who is your boss is a unique and fantastic experience.