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All Comments on 'Hans' Maids - Pt. 03: Both of Them'

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jurasickjurasickover 2 years ago

Excellent story, very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Following this 5* story is a pleasure.

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBabout 2 years ago

Great story, well written and believable.

Are you planning on continuing this story? It has the makings of a great Novel/novella

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WAY too much detail! I stopped midway down Page 1! Especially because all this detail, & the first page switches between his house and his apartment!!

MnhbMnhbabout 2 years agoAuthor

To whom the story had "WAY too much detail," that's what the LIT part of LITerotica means!!

MnhbMnhbabout 2 years agoAuthor

JohnnyRebBB and jurasick -- Thank you

WildErotica69WildErotica69over 1 year ago

Amazing story and build up - just loved it - would have been even more amazing had he managed to impregnate them both with his love child

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great piece of work and well

scripted. You could have continued with it.

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French expatriate working in Asia, primarily India and Vietnam, with an ache for sexual adventure and in constant search of love.

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