All Comments on 'Happy to Serve Him'

This needs an editor. When two people are deeply involved you don't bring her "almost" to the edge. You bring her to the edge. This story is uses a few too many of almost. It sounds of hesitation.

I was also left wondering why he got to buy a record while she was given limited grocery money and would be punished if she went over. That struck me as being unfair to her. This is basically a slave/Master relationship rather than a marriage or a D/s.

Nice, well written, her talking about him spanking her pussy was a turn on

I only like BDSM stories when the participants give each other what they need in a loving and respectful way. I liked your couple and the story!!

Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I appreciate it, and I love hearing that the characters give each other what they need :)

I want to clarify that a budget doesn't equal unfairness. It could mean the submissive or slave has overspent in the past, and this is something her dom/master is helping her conquer. A record is cheaper than $50, so she was still given more money than He spent. Also, it's okay if not everything is "fair" all the time, especially in a dynamic both parties have consented to, and especially in a fantasy story about that dynamic.

Marriage, dom/sub life, and Master/slave dynamics don't need to be mutually exclusive roles.

This is a very nice story about a loving D/s relationship. There is a great deal of comfort in watching the couple’s love, stability,, compatibility and fire for each other: an incredible gift. It offers a glimpse into how things work to make that happen. Keep writing!