by bluecortina
STOP saying she loves him!
She cheats on him. Humiliates him. Abuses him! Physically assaults him. Emotionally and physically consummated a relationship with another man. Turns her husband into a eunuch! Enjoys beating the shit out of him and you tell us she loves him?!?
Where! Where the fuck is anything remotely resembling love? What “loving thibg0 does she do for him?!?
At this point, the most loving thing she could do would be to divorce him.
Why not publish under Racial sluts? What a wimp and a nasty whore for a wife. She should be getting paid for her efforts.
you know its 2023 you can be gay and and happy. wrong category belongs in fetish or gay male.
Just another whore and stupid wimp story garbage I imagine your wife uses you like your stories and you love it like I said just another stupid wimp
I realize it's fiction, but even an ordinary man gets a divorce. Really stupid.
"As always, it would help you understand the next chapter, if you have read the previous chapters." - What makes you think that most Loving Wives readers would want to read Fetish and BDSM?
just another crap cuck story why get married if you want to play good job its a story same as all the rest
Just awful.
None of the characters are likeable. There's no way to be empathetic to anyone. It's just a disastrous situation, and there's not going to be a recovery, except in the wildest flinging of fantasy. Since this is fantasy, that's okay.
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It's decently written. The descriptions are well done. There's a few over-used devices, used in the usual ways, but it's okay.
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Keep writing. Keep going.
This should be in FETISH. The cage is a toy he can remove at any time without the key. You obviously no nothing about the subject matter. A simply awful story, poorly planned out and executed. A waste of time.