All Comments on 'Hard Lessons'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the story but come on

Horny schoolboys would love this. I would love it more with horny schoolboys showing their affections. Maybe Becky has a boy who can use her new slave to degrade rather than Becky putting out for him?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Magnificent

Wonderful story, humiliation heaped on humiliation ! Of course, one has to suspend disbelief but that is hardly unique among stories here, it is fantasy after all. Great stuff. Love the manipulation by Becky.

You might want to edit the section prior to the mock exam, where you mix up the names of Becky and Leanne? It would also be good to get a little more description of Leanne's appearance but that is a small consideration.

The story has kind of concluded but there is scope for a continuation series too, which I for one would be happy to see.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nope

This was not erotic or sexy to me. Using school age children in a story is never good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great twist and turns ....

begs for a sequel ... or many ...

not a nice story ... but a witty and entertaining dark fantasy

missyoujaynemissyoujayneover 5 years ago
Maybe you want to be Leanne

I have written three stories (as yet unpublished) with a similar theme. I often wonder what it would be like to be held to ransom, then completely and comprehensibly dominated and screwed over by a young woman less than half my age, and who is also heartless cruel bitch. A few years ago I had a (lez) girlfriend who had several rude pictures of me, and threatened to use them to pimp me out to some of her friends with the instructions they could do whatever they wanted to/with me, but nothing came of it... except me, who came many time on my own fingers at the thought of what they would do.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
omg LOVE IT

Absolutely Love It, Please write a squeal or 2 i cat wait to see what's next for leane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I can’t speak for the author but I’d love to be Leanne.

I’ve always fantasized about a younger rival, who is inferior in age and stature, finding a way to blackmail me to submit completely to her will. It would have to be something really damaging/awful to keep me desperate enough to remain in compliance. That would give me the incentive for public behavior I wouldn’t otherwise undertake. I think it would be really hot to be stripped, publicly exposed to people I know, humiliated, required to do sex acts, and tied up somewhere to provide amusement for the public at large. Now, I just need to find a worthy younger female adversary who can find a way to compromise me & ultimately my inhibitions. That’s a tall order because I’m a talented woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fun, well paced and great plot build up

Other than Dixies downfall ch 1 this time also the plot excels. Great finale.

Thank You for sharing and all the best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Best story please write more parts of this

Will teacher able to repay her debts~?what more she has to go~? Some students and staff taking thier frustration on her but giving it a name of any social cause as bullying mention earlier and for thatmedium will be ,for eg school gathering ,or a annual event,like that, you know better what to add~?Please continue this story what more mother n doughter duo had for her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please next part also ..... continue....what happens next....add more scenarios like you did.... with more humiliation.....any way loved your story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely like this story I would love to read more of how this teacher is used in and around the school by everyone from kitchen help and janitorial staff and maintenance staff and students maybe some sex classes some more punishment day's more flag poll day's

kelseyrosesrredkelseyrosesrred4 months ago

I LOVE that she got dumped in the garbage and had leftover food dumped on her :)

toastywarm01toastywarm012 months ago

I loved Miss Croft and the way she joined in. Totally ridiculous and unbelievable but so much fun to read. Plus this is the second of your stories that I have read where the main character ends up covered in garbage. How thrilling!

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