All Comments on 'Harem House - Selene Pt. 07'

by SirAeghann

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ElectricBadgerElectricBadgeralmost 2 years ago

Really well written, love the characters. Enjoyed Selene taking a more active role forming the harem. Looking forward to seeing how the weekend goes! *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you so much for this nive series! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Like your style, the detailed view onto the relationship and the expression what "playing" actually means.

Please continue working on this as it is among the best stories I read! Greetings from Germany

SniperkingSniperkingover 1 year ago

Starting to lose interest. Wish there were deeper feelings apart from the slave thing. Didn't really like the security guard play. Still, kudos on the story, it's probably one of the better BDSM ones on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why the heck would you tease yourself even while being the dominant one?!!

ColonelpudColonelpudabout 1 year ago

Great story and well written. I'm binging on these stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.

SraulersSraulersabout 1 year ago

Well written if repetitive; seems to be stuck between a 24 hour full-time D/s and play-time only. He never formally declares them outside of playtime… not realistic. Still missing aftercare, and Selene takes it all much too lightly, recovering too quickly. Also, as mentioned previously, the security guard scene didn’t work and showed a lack of care on the Dom’s part. A Dom doesn’t give his subs to other men in an uncontrolled environment, unless he’s actually a pimp with disposable girls. Granted, he was probably faking it, but she has to question whether he can be trusted to have her best interests at heart. At some point they have to admit that it’s more than just BDSM…

Lil_kittyLil_kitty11 months ago

Very hot series. I'm not going to get into the realism of a BDSM relationship, because i don't think fantasy needs to live up to those standards. Is it making me hot and bothered to read Arthur and Selene's adventures? Yes.

Thank you, again, for creating and sharing.

Aussie1951Aussie195111 months ago
I agree with sniperking

His comments were spot on. He’s also thick as a brick, honestly this guy has a slave that LOVES him but hasn’t picked up on that or on Mindys hints. Fuck me, he’s giving Doms a bad name.. talk about fucking slow on the uptake. I hope he gets his act together really quick

Babsy830Babsy8304 months ago

Very sexy, erotic, arousing, with some awesome creative ideas. I really like Arthur

I personally would not share my guy, so this continuous campaign of hers to hook him up with whoever she can is really annoying me (and I know what’s coming because I’m reading this when there are already 22 chapters) but that’s just me projecting.

On the other hand, her constantly negotiating and arguing with him while maintaining her “slavedom “ should be grating on him. Maybe he’d rather have sub that is actually submissive. Of course, if it bothered him that much, maybe he’d actually do something about it.

Anyway, 5 ⭐️

Smartest1Smartest14 months ago

She does seem to top from the bottom. A little too much, really.

That s a tawse, btw.

5/5 though.

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Hey everybody! I'm an erotica writer working on a variety of stories, but the main series is a bdsm-themed serial harem story called Harem House. I plan to deliver new chapters on an approximately monthly schedule. I started a Patreon to support my writing, which you can fi...

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