All Comments on 'Harems of Elites Ep. 01 Act 02A'

Takes away from the story.

1/2 Just to self-correct here, I forgot to put in that this part was 9,500+ words.

2/2 Also, just to nitpick my own work, the last scene with Nathan feeling 'a soft piece of paper' was supposed to be a 'a soft film-like card.' Also, Jenny's a cross between a C and D Cup. My apologies.

Enjoy!