All Comments on 'Harems of Elites Ep. 02 Act 02A'

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KotopoofsKotopoofsover 3 years ago

I like it so far, but I wish Nathan would stop whining so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Yeah, the series is great, and I can't wait to read more of the world you've built and have Nathan get into it with his sisters in 'real time' rather than in flashbacks! :D

As the other commenter stated, my only complaint is that Nathan is so extremely 'emotionally constipated' and desperate to prove he's not into these women, when he clearly was at the time of their original encounters. Not that I want him to be the typical 'horny teenager', but in a world where laws have made those relationships so much less of a taboo, it feels a bit weird. Just my 2 cents!

cursrahcursrahabout 3 years ago

please continue this story

DarkSharkoDarkSharkoover 2 years ago

I would love to see thos storry continued

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