All Comments on 'Harley'

fucking hell !!!!!!

Nice, intensely erotic. Liked the anonymity viz. no names. Obviously not anonymous. Hope you keep sharing and if you do, might break up paragraphs around the sex (intensifies pace) and add more dialogue. Hey, just my POV. still a five for me.

Wow!!!! Just Wow!!!!

A great story with a lovely little twist at the end. More from you please.

So hot!

Please write more and share it with us

Excellent writing.

Fucking hot! What a great story and a cute twist. I hope you write more!

Really really good!

Great first story. keep it up.

Super sexy. Loved the ending. More from you please!

Excellent