All Comments on 'Harlot Queen of Demons'

Interesting. Cant wait to see more.

It was really good but you used the word “mused” too much

3/5, this is one of the thousands in lit that has promise, but falls short. Write the rest of the story with the atention you gave the opening scene, fix the occasional typo and grammer mistake(to be fair, i only saw 1 typo, and 5 grammer av per pagr), and this could easly rival endangerd in ratings.