by wajawhiii
Not bad at all. Carefully proofed and lots of sex. One thing would help forgetful readers like me is if you would alternate between using their given names and their relationships (wife/hubby).
Rather dumb to be honest. Might have worked if you cut the mindless filler out of it and made it a one page story because that was about all this had going for it.
And the point of this was?