All Comments on 'Harsh Introductions'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Where's the rest of the story

Very hard to follow. Reads like every second page is missing

MichaelFitzgeraldMichaelFitzgeraldabout 4 years ago

Nice job. A sweet romance with an BDSM whiff. I liked it. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Nice, I enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing where you take the story.

Submisky35Submisky35about 4 years ago

Long, but very well written story. I hope that Harsh Introductions will have a successor. This tale is just starting to get very interesting.

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