All Comments on 'Haunting Love'

was so worth it. I truly believe in soulmates and you captured the connection so well. The emotional torment the characters are going through is described so vividly, I felt as if I was right with them. Please continue this story.

I really loved this story, but I am not sure if I want her to choose life or death. so it may be awhile before another chapter could appear.

who can't chose a tense and stick to it. You had the makings of a good emotional story but I couldn't read it due to the switching of tenses.

Grammar, punctuation and choppy writing. It is obvious that the author has talent, but she needs the help of an editor.

So some editing may have been wanted, tenses may have been switched, does it really matter? I used a little imagination and remembered that this is not a submission for a Nobel Literary Award. The storyline was unusual and hauntingly beautiful (tinged with sadness) and that any author had the imagination and presence to even write it deserves a little leeway! Great work Rhiannon_Nyx...the next chapter should be interesting, can't wait! If there isn't another chapter, this submission still leaves me with a glow of emotion, that it makes me "feel" is a whole lot better than how perfectly edited it is!

that(in it's own way)was very moving.I cannot comment on the issues concerning grammar since(unlike some of the commenters) I am not an professor in the the English department.Keep writing,you are very good at it.