All Comments on 'Having Chris Big Time...'

there are sooo many spelling and grammar errors in this chapter that I couldn't get into the actual story as they distracted me. I mean there are 2 mistakes in the first line! 'for lawn' - never laughed so much at that.

Also it's rushed, you need to proof read first or use spell check or get an editor, maybe all 3.

Why not crawl back into your anorak and read some classical prose and leave the rest of us morons to enjoy anotrher of Alex tittilating tales, and if the writing on this site upsets you FIND ANOTHER SITE,

Well done again alex, keep em cumming.

Bust instead of bus. For lawn instead of forlorn. Geez. Get an editor.

Poorly written. Bad grammar & spelling.