All Comments on 'Hawke and his Princess Chapter 13'

His actions with the two kids plus his reactions to his emotions, brought tears to my eyes. very well written!

He also finding out that their family was killed by the same bandits that attacked him, and the rage, was a good part of it. If I remember correctly though, be careful with that. As in the series, Anger, Rage and hatred can make a mage fall from grace. though, now that I think about it. That would be a great story arc! his rage and anger gets out of control and Elayne helps him back from it along with Bethany.