All Comments on 'Hawke's Shot'

...and well done. I didn't intend to keep reading since light dominance/submission isn't really my thing, but the writing compelled me. You deserve good feedback & encouragement for pulling this off: it winds up feeling really original. :) Thanks, and more please!

good so far . . . fan off almost all things superpower lesbian variety I'd like to read more

That was very imaginative, very funny, and even made me squirm a little.

Well, that escalated quickly. o_o You should totally write about Tina's further exploits under her new super villain mistress. :3