All Comments on 'Hayli's "Sliding Door" Ch. 02B'

by Menderman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story ! why not continue Hayli ch 3 ?

Hi Menderman, the way u write is veri realistic & i like the way u gave options on how the story will go...

Hope u could keep on writing, especially on Hayli maybe could include more ppl or write a story on how Hayli was kidnapped, tied up & raped by the Prof again..

TiredXTiredXover 6 years ago
Awesome!

I love your take on the parallel outcomes/butterfly effect theory in your story please keep it up. Can't wait for "Hayli's Sliding Door – Option 2C – Sarah, I'm curious as to how Sarah will handle things when given her turn at the wheel.

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