All Comments on 'Hazel's Night at the Club Pt. 04: Hazel's Perspective'

You published this 9 part story a year ago...why reissue it?

You published this 9-part story 2 years ago...

When did rape become acceptable? Most of Ashton's stories involve what is technically rape, but are delivered tongue in cheek.

Ridiculous story - not the least of which was when the narrators's "hymen snapped". Really?

This reads like fanfic written by a fourteen year old.

I hope you not only repost what was removed, but continue the story as well.

Thank you.

Can you please repost the missing parts and keep going from there? It is a fun story idea that doesn’t come up often.

Well, please continue with her adventures at the gloryhole shop. She still needs more guys to take her down a few more pegs. Love the pov of her thoughts and feelings while she is progressing through her exciting time becoming a sex object that she so clearly refused many others. Hopefully we will read more soon.

Please add more dialogue in your stories. You have good ideas but need more dialogue to really bring the characters together.