All Comments on 'He Didn't Think It Would Work'

by JamiePlynth

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer9 months ago

OMG!!! Nothing feels better that a good orgasm except maybe a good laugh. This terrific story had both, it was hot and hilarious. You outdid yourself with this one JP. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The only thing that would have made this even better would be if he was recording all this as one of his many keepsakes.

Great read!

SirSoonerSirSooner5 months ago

The twist here was excellent. It also turned into a very hot non-consent / mind control scene. I ended up enjoying this one even more than I expected. Good job.

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Tepid romantic, part-time eroticist. Burgeoning writer of moody adult material. More to come!