All Comments on 'He Drops the Soap'

Very nice. Exciting and arousing x

Well done for your first story. I hope there will be many more to follow.

Enjoy writing for yourself. Don't worry too much about rating as some rate you badly because it's not what they like. Nothing to do with the quality of your story.

When the grammar policeman arrives read what he says and try harder next time but remember, this is your story for us to like or dislike as we please.

Again - l love your story.

Anne

Enchantment

Cagey gives us a fascinating love story on a get away for two. Well done.

Another coffee right now would just make this morning perfect