by 1Alwayswatching
Good start. You write well. Things are just beginning to heat up. I hope you are planning a Part 2 - there are a lot of ways this story could go from here.
Quick, sexy, and fun.
I liked that the husband - who saw his wife as sexy - wanted HER to see herself that way...
...and she finally did.
Nice work for a new writer, and 5 stars, too.
In all honesty, I was that wife 30 years ago and a similar conversation sparked curiosity on my part and well we've not looked back since. It does happen sometimes and just takes a little more insight and encouragement to help one partner overcome the insecurities and self consciousness we all have from time to time.
Good story! I like to read a story where the wife enjoys pleasing her husband!
Yes, fine story! Thank you. Your characters are both well conceived and developed.
Cute! Transition was a bit quick, but gust of the storyline was believable. 4*
My wife lacks body confidence as well. Most of the time she really only gets horny when guys hit on her This was great and I can see my wife doing some of this
As long as she loves her husband,
and he doesn't run amuck,
We're relatively safe in saying,
Henry won't become a cuck!